Feedback - What do you think of people's RP writing?

[undeadsteak]

Yep, Wangs story is tight.

[wangxiuming]

Thanks for all the support guys. I kind of want to check out Goblins Comics now ... but I don't want to plagiarize by accident.

Verrath's letters are really good - it's really remarkable how distinct the personalities are in them.

I also want to give props to Chiangtao, who has several posts that I think are worth a look. The Whist Wolf, for one.

[joker]

If you check out the Goblins Comics, start at the beginning. It starts off in black and white and then eventually goes to color. However, it is best read from the beginning.

[steel505]

The fact that so many are writing like this just makes me want to be that more involved with Sundren. It's great that people can seriously develop their characters. Just show's me and any other newcomers just how great Sundren and its people are. (No, not trying to kiss up ).

[darcane]

Yea wang...i really enjoyed the story,very creative!!!Kudos broseph!!
Goin to check out Annies now.

[Gabryal]

Posted my first RP thread today, and I'd like opinions from people here, I got a few from some of the new friends I've made, but I'd like to see what everyone thinks. I also am thinking about where to take Treyr next, so opinions might fuel some creative juices. Thanks in advance. Oh and it's name is "Born of Pain".

[Verrath]

While I wait for Port AVanthyr to load, I'm reading over some posts.

I have to say I really like how Eira is developing - nice RP post.

http://www.sundren.org/forum/showthread.php?t=7986

[Urithrand]

When I first arrived here in Sundren I rarely read through the forums, just taking a look at the front page news, but once I realised what a treasure-trove of character development this place was, I've visited every day, sometimes several times. It's awesome learning more about peoples' characters and being able to RP when maybe I don't have enough time to warrant logging in, still getting involved in things.

I find everyones' writing to be enjoyable, in particular I find Sehron and Yashia's posts along with Snow Hawk and Sol's posts to be particularly fun to read. Not limited to those few however, it's all fun and engaging reading!

[Azulfae]

It is nice to read about peoples characters.

Sometimes you read stuff you were there to witness happening in game and sometimes it's things about a character you already knew.

Sometimes though there are things that your PC could never have known ICly. It's information you can never react to ICly but it is all fun to know because it gives you a better feel for the picture of the characters you meet.

Reading their perspectives and feelings about things suddenly makes the picture clearer and gives the toon an atmosphere that you would have never picked up on before.

Without it, sometimes, you just see another PC moping about doing the same stuff as everyone else.

[CynicalMadness]

Phazz the contract is perfect. Perfect!

Cyn

[The Almight Red]

I demand more writing about Malaclypse. That post, about him trying to set liberty to the captive farm animals, it was just genius.

More, I say!

[rustediron]

Agreed with the above!

[cdnspr]

I liked TrentFromPunchy's story about his character Hardak Nowonson, The Antlers of the Elk. Everyone should read it!

[Frosty]

It makes me smile to see people viewing my biography story so quickly. ^^

I post them as soon as I'm finished writing them, and it's 3am! Eek. :O
I do hope you enjoy them and not think you're wasting your time. ^^

[roguethree]

Revivify. People seem to be putting more effort into the rp central stories (everyone should!), so I felt it was time to show my appreciation for some specific authors:

Kaizen - If you could stick with a character, I'd really like to see how you develop the story. As it is, you write a bunch of sick teaser trailers and never play the dude again. :P

Peridan - You're crafting a novel-worthy antagonist in Daniel. He's definitely more interesting than the majority of the fantasy antagonists you'll get from the FR books.

Crow - I enjoy the philosophical musings of the creature that can't even justify her own existence but clings desperately to it.

You guys are working hard to keep me entertained. Update more, please.