Missing men

[Lanemeyer]

\\ Please guys, tell me if there are english errors \\

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A man, who calls himself Captain Majer of Neverwinter, claims that he is willing to pay about 800 stags to the person or group that will find his missing soldier.

The Captain says that he has arrived with 20 men under his command with a secret mission from Neverwinter and that 3 of them have been missing for a couple of weeks. The belief is based on the fact that they have not turned up for the last few weekly meetings, which take place in the Four Lanters Inn, nearby the Gate of the Sunderer. The Captain is hopeful that two of the men whom had disappeared were the same ones he had seen a few days ago walking around, seemingly lost, in the forest of Viridale.

Rumours state that the Captain has absolutely no idea where the final soldier could be found, and that he is looking everywhere in the hope that he might find him safe and sound.

Upon further inquiry, it appears that the name of the missing soldier is Sergeant Zig. He allegedly wields two weapons, has short blonde hair, light blue eyes, and is the same size as his Captain.

[rustediron]

\\ Please guys, tell me if there are english errors \\

\\ Harr harr, ye doan't need t'be askin' matey, aye!

A man, who calls himself Captain Majer of Neverwinter, claims that he is willing to pay about 800 stags to the person or group that will find his missing soldier.

The Captain says that he has arrived with 20 men under his command with a secret mission from Neverwinter and that 3 of them have been missing for a couple of weeks. The belief is based on the fact that they have not turned up for the last few weekly meetings, which take place in the Four Lanters Inn, nearby the Gate of the Sunderer. The Captain is hopeful that two of the men whom had disappeared were the same ones he had seen a few days ago walking around, seemingly lost, in the forest of Viridale.

Rumours state that the Captain has absolutely no idea where the final soldier could be found, and that he is looking everywhere in the hope that he might find him safe and sound.

Upon further inquiry, it appears that the name of the missing soldier is Sergeant Zig. He allegedly wields two weapons, has short blonde hair, light blue eyes, and is the same size as his Captain.

\\ Yes, I was very bored. Now I feel ashamed of myself...
\\ Not meaning to take a jab at you, if I remember you're Brazilian aren't you?

[R3VOLV360]

\\ Please guys, tell me if there are english errors \\

*/ You revamped it entirely :|
There weren't any errors as such only error i see is:
and is the same size of his Captain.
But yeah, otherwise I'm taking this very OT.... */

[rustediron]

*/ You revamped it entirely :|
There weren't any errors as such only error i see is:
and is the same size of his Captain.
But yeah, otherwise I'm taking this very OT.... */

\\yeah, I know, lol, it was fine as it is. I was just bored

[Lanemeyer]

\\ thanks, I have updated, it is hard for me to use better words like you guys do

and yes, I'm brazilian, but this is not the problem, the problem is that I never took classes and I would, but I would have to stop playing, then I think it is better to learn playing than to have classes =P \\

[gumbomasta]

I would be interested in finding this missing soldier. Where would the search party gather and when?

[Lanemeyer]

There is a rumor going on that the one who calls himself Captain Majer of Neverwinter has found an object wich belongs to Sergeant Zig Howkee. The object wich has been found is an insignia from Neverwinter that identify people as official military special force, in that case, the name Howkee appears on it, and, it has been found on the ground inside the Exigo Mines in a pile of goblin's bones.

Sergeant Zig is missing for much time already and Captain Majer doesn't think that will be possible to find him alive anymore.

There are a few flyers hanging around Sundren's inns and also around the Exigo Trading Post, the flyesrs say that the Captain Majer is willing to pay about 800 stags yet, for the person or group that will find the lost one, even if he is dead.

\\ corrections? ;P - I could use an event to get this done. Any DM to help me? \\

[cmosier]

I'm from the Southern US. . . . Everythang looked ahhiite tu me.

[Lanemeyer]

The word spreads fast at the Four Lanterns Inn in Sundren. Captain Majer and a few allies have found Sergeant Zig almost dead in the crypt inside the Exigo Mines.

Sergeant Zig was under torture by a man who claimed to be a banite, still, Zig doesn't talk about what happened in the crypt at all. This man of Bane had several zombies around him under his control. The Captain said out loud to his allies to take care of the Sergeant as he was charging against the Banite tumbling through the zombies, the strategy went well. The banite has been defeated by Captain Majer but it was not enough, he came back as an undead who has been defeated once more. The group then took care of the Sergeant and they fought their way outside the Exigo Mines where Sergeant Zig went on his way back to the Inn.

Majer's men gave to Zig a welcome back celebration with lots of drinks and entertainment stuff, and of course, lots of women. The men also got the chance to celebrate the introduction of the new recruit Uther who has been recruted by Majer himself.

\\ corrections? \\

\\ thanks Machi who ran an event to this =) \\

[SinAbsolute]

OOC: Everything seems gramatically correct. Wish I could have been there though :\ Damn my schedule...

[steel505]

OCC: seriously buddy, you're English isn't bad. And I totally agree with your no class idea
Sorry I didn't make it; would have been good RP