Feedback - What do you think of people's RP writing?

[CynicalMadness]

Phazz the contract is perfect. Perfect!

Cyn

[Azulfae]

It is nice to read about peoples characters.

Sometimes you read stuff you were there to witness happening in game and sometimes it's things about a character you already knew.

Sometimes though there are things that your PC could never have known ICly. It's information you can never react to ICly but it is all fun to know because it gives you a better feel for the picture of the characters you meet.

Reading their perspectives and feelings about things suddenly makes the picture clearer and gives the toon an atmosphere that you would have never picked up on before.

Without it, sometimes, you just see another PC moping about doing the same stuff as everyone else.

[Urithrand]

When I first arrived here in Sundren I rarely read through the forums, just taking a look at the front page news, but once I realised what a treasure-trove of character development this place was, I've visited every day, sometimes several times. It's awesome learning more about peoples' characters and being able to RP when maybe I don't have enough time to warrant logging in, still getting involved in things.

I find everyones' writing to be enjoyable, in particular I find Sehron and Yashia's posts along with Snow Hawk and Sol's posts to be particularly fun to read. Not limited to those few however, it's all fun and engaging reading!

[Verrath]

While I wait for Port AVanthyr to load, I'm reading over some posts.

I have to say I really like how Eira is developing - nice RP post.

http://www.sundren.org/forum/showthread.php?t=7986

[Gabryal]

Posted my first RP thread today, and I'd like opinions from people here, I got a few from some of the new friends I've made, but I'd like to see what everyone thinks. I also am thinking about where to take Treyr next, so opinions might fuel some creative juices. Thanks in advance. Oh and it's name is "Born of Pain".

[darcane]

Yea wang...i really enjoyed the story,very creative!!!Kudos broseph!!
Goin to check out Annies now.

[steel505]

The fact that so many are writing like this just makes me want to be that more involved with Sundren. It's great that people can seriously develop their characters. Just show's me and any other newcomers just how great Sundren and its people are. (No, not trying to kiss up ).

[joker]

If you check out the Goblins Comics, start at the beginning. It starts off in black and white and then eventually goes to color. However, it is best read from the beginning.

[wangxiuming]

Thanks for all the support guys. I kind of want to check out Goblins Comics now ... but I don't want to plagiarize by accident.

Verrath's letters are really good - it's really remarkable how distinct the personalities are in them.

I also want to give props to Chiangtao, who has several posts that I think are worth a look. The Whist Wolf, for one.

[undeadsteak]

Yep, Wangs story is tight.

[Verrath]

Why thank you

Second, Wangxiuming's "A Story Through Different Eyes"
http://www.sundren.org/forum/showthread.php?t=7103

I heartily agree - very original, and nicely written!

[Machiavelli]

I like reading people's RP posts, and I should probably post here more often about ones I enjoyed. There are two threads I've particularly enjoyed recently.

First, Verrath's "Annie's Letter Home"
http://www.sundren.org/forum//showthread.php?t=7092

Second, Wangxiuming's "A Story Through Different Eyes"
http://www.sundren.org/forum/showthread.php?t=7103

Both these posts are beautifully written and entertaining. Nice work!

[Delexos]

Just a quick message to Unholy Carp.

I am greatly enjoying the style of writing you use, it has a very similar flavor to the works of Terry Pratchet and that is always a winner in my book. Please do keep them coming, I look forward to the next installment.

[GodBeastX]

To use the Dead - Vichtor

I like reading research journals of Wizards. Wizardry is something I consider like science. And much like scientists/engineers, if you don't have real passion for the craft, you won't advance that far. So seeing people's passion for it in their RP is epic for me. Keep it up vich

[Drancor]

i have to admit i love reading nyssis's writing, where iam just typing the way vrog thinks and would write her stories are quite good. It like turning a page of a book you want to know what happens.