Feedback - What do you think of people's RP writing?

[Chocolate Radio]

Due to the branch of magic that I've had the more-commonly used of my characters utilize, I admit I've really enjoyed The Diary of a Necromancer posts done by InflatableFriend. Been a short while since I've visited the forums due to me moving back to Germany at the end of leave, but Samak has made a move to mention an additional possibility added to the last posting. :P

5. The Vagabond

In the wartorn lands of Sundren, one hardly needs to search hard for a viable spot for the practice of Necromancy. A few spell components and an odd bone or two are quite sufficient. Why nail yourself to one spot? Why impose limitations based on one small, secluded region? If your goal is secrecy, a bird in flight is harder to shoot down than one perched. If your goal is resources, it is easier to move yourself to the abundance of formerly-living material beneath every scrap of dirt than unearthing them and dragging the load to some distant locale. Without manacling oneself to a single base of operations, a wily necromancer can instead use the liberated time to follow alternative pursuits (for example, investigating issues which your order would probably prefer to see resolved).

The type of individual that follows this route will likely eschew the baggy and utterly-inefficient (and constantly catching-on-protruding-objects) black robes expected of a practitioner of the "dark arts" for something more suitable for a life on the road. A solid pair of boots and a weatherproof cloak are the only shelter one truly needs. If you happen to be the type that becomes squeamish at the thought of a little dirt under your fingernails, this manner of life is probably not for you. However, if you're the sort to grab life by the horns (and don't mind walking a short distance in order to do so), the many roadside ditches in the realm have all the shelter one may possibly require.

[Standur]

I am enjoying Peridan's Nobody posts. More please.

[Intrepid42]

Because it made me think of him being a vampire.

I'm sure it did. Those vampires are probably just waiting for the chance to drink Murin's health.

They'll tire of abducting innocent young maidens soon enough, and seek Murin out for his high alcohol content. Nowhere is safe, it seems.

[OnyxTigress]

Oh I know the meaning of it, but it's supposed to be that you toast TO Murin's health.

[Dave Fritz]

And as a side note, I have to chuckle at what I assume is a type Dave Fritz from your rp post, that Tery "drinks Murin's health." Because it made me think of him being a vampire.

Actually, it's not. It's another way of saying "Toasts Murin" or "drinks a toast to Murin."

[OnyxTigress]

Time to revive this!

Foogoo, roguethree, and Nyssis I very much enjoy the rp posts you have made, and I demand moar.

And Kasso, I very much enjoy the letters home from Anasath.

And as a side note, I have to chuckle at what I assume is a type Dave Fritz from your rp post, that Tery "drinks Murin's health." Because it made me think of him being a vampire.

[Greklin]

Burn the heretic! Kill the mutant! Purge the unclean!

.... naw, but love your writing! :3

Blood for the blood god.

[Maevan2]

*raises his fist an shouts* Death to all bloodsuckers! They shall burn in hell! Burn bloodsucker! Burn!

[prismaticcrow]

The character would be nothing without amazing RPers like you guys. Thank you for the kind words. =)

[Lilene Jora]

Seconded! Your entries are always lovely crow, and that one made me sniffle again in recollection.

[FoogooFish]

The latest entry in The Diary of the Dead is just phenomenal. Fantastic work, PCrow!

[FoogooFish]

I would like to invite all the people (there's about... four or five of you, I think?) who voted one's or two's for my RP thread as well as giving me disapproval reputation to please give me proper feedback either here or via PMs. After all, I cannot improve to earn those higher ratings unless I know why, exactly, my writing sucks.

[Kangleton]

My thanks goes out to all of you, though you cannot praise me without praising my inspiration. All of your kudos must be redirected to Tigen, because every great story of conflict requires a loser.

[very angry goose]

He's very likely the best Canadian roleplay writer on the whole board.

I don't know about that. RadiumKnight might, just might give him a run for his money. And he's French Canadian so he has a suave accent.

[Lothoir]

This thread is veering dangerously off-topic. So let's go back to the original point of this thread: To share our mutual adoration of Kangleton's RP. He may be a vegan, he may even be Canadian. But in spite of all of these disadvantages he has worked hard, showing us what is possible if only we believe in ourselves. He is truly an inspiration to everyone. Kangleton is the best roleplayer on these forums, and a blessing to us all.