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(( I know this is the IC thread but I wanted to post it here so everyone can see it.. I am really proud of it and do not be afraid to give me feedback or criticism. ))
Name: Elronia Dy'ner
Class: Samurai
Race: Half-drow
Age: 28
Appearance: This half-drow has great looks and she have a unique hair color. As well as a unique eye color. The eye color is bright pink and the hair is also bright pink. She always carries a Katana on her back. It is holstered in a fine holster. The holster is wrapped in cloth and it is the size of an tall dwarf. As soon she takes out the katana you can see several "runes" on the blade. It is in a strong dark gold color. It shimmers more then you ever could imagine and it is thin as spaghettistraw. The blade has a minor curve on it so the slices gets stronger and takes more effect. The katana is razor sharp. Her body curves are extremely well shaped and she have a rather large bust. She is tall and she look powerful there she stands. She always have a glimse of hate in her eyes. A fury that never gets out. Her face curves are rather good as well. She have a rather long nose and thick and beautiful lips. Her hair is tied up and braided at the back. Shehave two chinese sticks in the hair at the braided knots. The braided hair splits in two pieces and at the bottom is a dark colored hairband. She have a short bangs and they seem well trimmed.
Background: Chapter 1: The serpent snake
It is midnight at a rather large house somewhere in the wastelands of Calimshan. Inside this house there is four kids. There are a twin sister to a little child at the age of 4 and she is called Elronia Dy'ner. Her twin sister's name is Rania Dy'ner. Elronia has two bigger brothers. The youngest big brother is at the age of 15 and the oldest of the big brothers is 17. The younger big brother's name is Danny Dy'ner and the oldest big brother is called Li'rach Dy'ner. Elronia's mother is at the age of 56 and her name is Jana Goodspring. She is a human and a very kind at that. Her father is at the age of 53 and his name is Lar'katzou and he is an drow.They lived together happily in over 26 years. But that is about to end.
The night began to get brighter. But before that Lar'katzou caught his woman being in bed with his best friend and his brother. He screams at them and swears that he will kill them all even the kids. Elronia hears her mothers sobbing and praying to her god. The mother walks downstairs after she heard knocking on the door. She opens the door and she freezes in place because she got so darn scared. She yells at the kids to take cover. Just when she said that she hears a blade getting pulled out from a holster. She runs down and sees a yuan-ti pureblooded female thrusting her mother with the blade in the stomach. The blood runs down and the mother's white dress slowly turns blood red. The other kids are now awake and stands at the stairs and sees their mother slowly dropping to the floor.
The oldest brother screams out and rushes towards the yuan-ti female. The female takes forth a dagger. At the dagger it would be a snake carved in the blade and you could almost smell the poison coming from the dagger. As the brother ran towards the lady with his fists in the air and tries to strike at her stomach the yuan-ti makes a small spin and as she spinned she would cut the throat open of the brother. The brother whimpers and whines a few seconds as the blood pours downwards on his night costume. You could then see the blood veins going to a sickly green color and then the veins would explode and you see all the blood flying through the air and lands everywhere. He would then collapse.
The other brother gets a tear running down his chin but the yuan-ti showed no mercy. The yuan-ti picked the younger brother up by the throat and slamming him into a wall-spike and impale him like a head on a spear. The younger brother twitches and gets some spasms in himself and shakes three times and a final time and then he would be dead.
Elronia runs up the stairs and holds Rania in the hand while doing so. Rania slips out of Elronia's grip and hides in a closet. Elronia goes to hide underneath the bed. She hears the stomps of the yuan-ti's boots as she walks up the stairs. As she reached the top she went in the room there they were hiding. The yuan-ti Hasn't seen Elronia yet it seems. The yuan-ti sniffs the air and goes to the closet there Rania hid. Rania lets out a scream as the blood covered yuan-ti rips the closet doors open.
The yuan-ti grapples Rania and carries her over to the bed. She smacks her down to the floor next to the bed. Elronia faces Rania's terrified eyes. At that moment she looked in her eyes Rania gets a large blade into her head. The blade went through the side off her head and blood splashes out and it would almost be like a fountain. Elronia gets stains of Rania's blood on herself. She just lies there still not making a sound and stares at Rania with her paralyzed facial expression. Rania's eyes slowly goes upwards and her mouth remains open. You could see the blade being in the head at the gapping mouth. The blade has struck through her tongue and the chin. You could see the blade glimmering in her mouth. The yuan-ti would then pull the blade out and she would slowly create a fire ball. She fires the fire ball at the ceiling and soon the house would be set in fires.
The yuan-ti makes her exit and as she left Elronia she could see a marking showing a Serpent and a Rose stuck in the serpent. She also saw a small snake wrapped around that rose. As soon the yuan-ti left Elronia would rush out from underneath the bed and jump out of the window. Luckily that left side of the house had an large hill that she landed on. She did wound herself a little but she managed to stumble away on weak legs with blood stains on her night dress and on her face.
Chapter 2: The Journey
It has now passed 4 years. Elronia has told the story about the end of her family to an older man. Luckily this man were not a psycopath that did not have any feeling or any thing like that. The elder was really wise and the man did have a ship that is rather large to contain a lot of goods wares and various things. Elronia asked the elder about why he drives around with these containers. The man answered.
- It is because I need to make a living.. And by driving goods around the seas. It is really good for your pouch.
Elronia smiled and wandered around the ship and noticed a small cottage. Inside the cottage there was the dagger that killed her biggest brother. She walked inside the cottage with the help by a medium sized window. She inspected the cottage cautiously. She walked over to a footlocker and opened up the footlocker and saw the blade and a book. She Backed away and heard someone coming towards the cottage. She looked around for a good place to hide and decided to get inside the foot locker with the blade and the book.
the foot locker were big and did not contain much. She hid herself there as she heard the door open. She let out a quiet yelp as she felt the sword grinding itself into her flesh. It now has gone 3 hours and she were still in the foot locker. The being finally ventured out of the cottage. The blade has now sunk deep in her back.
She opened the foot locker and cried quietly. The blade were stuck in her back. She took the blade and pulled it out. She let out a quiet scream as she pulled it out. She stumbled out of the door and walked over to the older man. The older man dropped his jaw and began to patch Elronia up. As soon he were done with that nothing much else happened afterwards.
It went 1 year and then the old man went to Elronia and told her that he used to be an samurai. He said that he could teach her the arts of a samurai and make her strong enough to kill the one whom slained her family he would also teach him the disciplines and the codes for a samurai as well.. After that she would go after her father.
The training went on in 8 years and it should actually take 10 years. But she did not need these two other years. She were now stronger then the teacher whom now was over 80 years.
Another year passed and now they were both ashore. They've been ashore for 6 months now and the elder were in his death's bed. The last words he said to Elronia was.
-Always.. Use your.. Powers... For good.. Avenge.... Your family.. Avenge the one... Who poisoned your..Soul.. I am proud over you.. Elronia you... Are my last.. Student.. And that. Makes me able... To rest in... Peace..
After those words the man died and Elronia began to cry and she were now at the age of 18. She ended her journey in Sundren and seeked the man Locke up to become her lord. Gladly Locke accepted and he is now the lord over Elronia Dy'ner. She is living happily at the land of sundren and she also is at the age of 26. And her looks never decieves her. but her blood lust always remains and her fury as well.
(Well that was the character request/story for my char ^^ I hope you will read it through properly! And do note that the clock was 03:00 on the morning when I did this background.)
Name: Elronia Dy'ner
Class: Samurai
Race: Half-drow
Age: 28
Appearance: This half-drow has great looks and she have a unique hair color. As well as a unique eye color. The eye color is bright pink and the hair is also bright pink. She always carries a Katana on her back. It is holstered in a fine holster. The holster is wrapped in cloth and it is the size of an tall dwarf. As soon she takes out the katana you can see several "runes" on the blade. It is in a strong dark gold color. It shimmers more then you ever could imagine and it is thin as spaghettistraw. The blade has a minor curve on it so the slices gets stronger and takes more effect. The katana is razor sharp. Her body curves are extremely well shaped and she have a rather large bust. She is tall and she look powerful there she stands. She always have a glimse of hate in her eyes. A fury that never gets out. Her face curves are rather good as well. She have a rather long nose and thick and beautiful lips. Her hair is tied up and braided at the back. Shehave two chinese sticks in the hair at the braided knots. The braided hair splits in two pieces and at the bottom is a dark colored hairband. She have a short bangs and they seem well trimmed.
Background: Chapter 1: The serpent snake
It is midnight at a rather large house somewhere in the wastelands of Calimshan. Inside this house there is four kids. There are a twin sister to a little child at the age of 4 and she is called Elronia Dy'ner. Her twin sister's name is Rania Dy'ner. Elronia has two bigger brothers. The youngest big brother is at the age of 15 and the oldest of the big brothers is 17. The younger big brother's name is Danny Dy'ner and the oldest big brother is called Li'rach Dy'ner. Elronia's mother is at the age of 56 and her name is Jana Goodspring. She is a human and a very kind at that. Her father is at the age of 53 and his name is Lar'katzou and he is an drow.They lived together happily in over 26 years. But that is about to end.
The night began to get brighter. But before that Lar'katzou caught his woman being in bed with his best friend and his brother. He screams at them and swears that he will kill them all even the kids. Elronia hears her mothers sobbing and praying to her god. The mother walks downstairs after she heard knocking on the door. She opens the door and she freezes in place because she got so darn scared. She yells at the kids to take cover. Just when she said that she hears a blade getting pulled out from a holster. She runs down and sees a yuan-ti pureblooded female thrusting her mother with the blade in the stomach. The blood runs down and the mother's white dress slowly turns blood red. The other kids are now awake and stands at the stairs and sees their mother slowly dropping to the floor.
The oldest brother screams out and rushes towards the yuan-ti female. The female takes forth a dagger. At the dagger it would be a snake carved in the blade and you could almost smell the poison coming from the dagger. As the brother ran towards the lady with his fists in the air and tries to strike at her stomach the yuan-ti makes a small spin and as she spinned she would cut the throat open of the brother. The brother whimpers and whines a few seconds as the blood pours downwards on his night costume. You could then see the blood veins going to a sickly green color and then the veins would explode and you see all the blood flying through the air and lands everywhere. He would then collapse.
The other brother gets a tear running down his chin but the yuan-ti showed no mercy. The yuan-ti picked the younger brother up by the throat and slamming him into a wall-spike and impale him like a head on a spear. The younger brother twitches and gets some spasms in himself and shakes three times and a final time and then he would be dead.
Elronia runs up the stairs and holds Rania in the hand while doing so. Rania slips out of Elronia's grip and hides in a closet. Elronia goes to hide underneath the bed. She hears the stomps of the yuan-ti's boots as she walks up the stairs. As she reached the top she went in the room there they were hiding. The yuan-ti Hasn't seen Elronia yet it seems. The yuan-ti sniffs the air and goes to the closet there Rania hid. Rania lets out a scream as the blood covered yuan-ti rips the closet doors open.
The yuan-ti grapples Rania and carries her over to the bed. She smacks her down to the floor next to the bed. Elronia faces Rania's terrified eyes. At that moment she looked in her eyes Rania gets a large blade into her head. The blade went through the side off her head and blood splashes out and it would almost be like a fountain. Elronia gets stains of Rania's blood on herself. She just lies there still not making a sound and stares at Rania with her paralyzed facial expression. Rania's eyes slowly goes upwards and her mouth remains open. You could see the blade being in the head at the gapping mouth. The blade has struck through her tongue and the chin. You could see the blade glimmering in her mouth. The yuan-ti would then pull the blade out and she would slowly create a fire ball. She fires the fire ball at the ceiling and soon the house would be set in fires.
The yuan-ti makes her exit and as she left Elronia she could see a marking showing a Serpent and a Rose stuck in the serpent. She also saw a small snake wrapped around that rose. As soon the yuan-ti left Elronia would rush out from underneath the bed and jump out of the window. Luckily that left side of the house had an large hill that she landed on. She did wound herself a little but she managed to stumble away on weak legs with blood stains on her night dress and on her face.
Chapter 2: The Journey
It has now passed 4 years. Elronia has told the story about the end of her family to an older man. Luckily this man were not a psycopath that did not have any feeling or any thing like that. The elder was really wise and the man did have a ship that is rather large to contain a lot of goods wares and various things. Elronia asked the elder about why he drives around with these containers. The man answered.
- It is because I need to make a living.. And by driving goods around the seas. It is really good for your pouch.
Elronia smiled and wandered around the ship and noticed a small cottage. Inside the cottage there was the dagger that killed her biggest brother. She walked inside the cottage with the help by a medium sized window. She inspected the cottage cautiously. She walked over to a footlocker and opened up the footlocker and saw the blade and a book. She Backed away and heard someone coming towards the cottage. She looked around for a good place to hide and decided to get inside the foot locker with the blade and the book.
the foot locker were big and did not contain much. She hid herself there as she heard the door open. She let out a quiet yelp as she felt the sword grinding itself into her flesh. It now has gone 3 hours and she were still in the foot locker. The being finally ventured out of the cottage. The blade has now sunk deep in her back.
She opened the foot locker and cried quietly. The blade were stuck in her back. She took the blade and pulled it out. She let out a quiet scream as she pulled it out. She stumbled out of the door and walked over to the older man. The older man dropped his jaw and began to patch Elronia up. As soon he were done with that nothing much else happened afterwards.
It went 1 year and then the old man went to Elronia and told her that he used to be an samurai. He said that he could teach her the arts of a samurai and make her strong enough to kill the one whom slained her family he would also teach him the disciplines and the codes for a samurai as well.. After that she would go after her father.
The training went on in 8 years and it should actually take 10 years. But she did not need these two other years. She were now stronger then the teacher whom now was over 80 years.
Another year passed and now they were both ashore. They've been ashore for 6 months now and the elder were in his death's bed. The last words he said to Elronia was.
-Always.. Use your.. Powers... For good.. Avenge.... Your family.. Avenge the one... Who poisoned your..Soul.. I am proud over you.. Elronia you... Are my last.. Student.. And that. Makes me able... To rest in... Peace..
After those words the man died and Elronia began to cry and she were now at the age of 18. She ended her journey in Sundren and seeked the man Locke up to become her lord. Gladly Locke accepted and he is now the lord over Elronia Dy'ner. She is living happily at the land of sundren and she also is at the age of 26. And her looks never decieves her. but her blood lust always remains and her fury as well.
(Well that was the character request/story for my char ^^ I hope you will read it through properly! And do note that the clock was 03:00 on the morning when I did this background.)
))
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