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  • Prelude, Embers of Time (I'm promoting like a mad man) *cheesy grin*

    So, as you might have seen on the news board, I'm in the process of having a book published, Embers of Time. Now that may or may not end up being the final title, as it is already in title as a romance novel (much to my dismay), as well as a Wiccan religion title.

    With that being said, I am in promotion, so it is no surprise that I am promoting here, and I do hope that you all enjoy the book if you purchase it, or even pirate it off of a torrent. It doesn't matter to me, it's just a dream I've had to have an actual book completed.

    Also, I am not including the full prelude, but a section of it, until I know for sure what my abilities to do so are.

    I'm not always quite so literary...and I'm drunk while posting this. Fancy that, I can type as if I had ten fingers right now...oh and I do, they just look like five at the moment.

    So, with no further introduction planned...

    Embers of Time
    By Alden S. Hawthorne
    Prelude

    "What was once untouched, rugged, and pure in all forms had become sordid, and tainted. It was a redoubtable pain that was lifted to the air by tens of thousands of voices, harshly endured by the ears of many more. The people of the Andurican Mountains were being annhilated. Many had fled down the rocky outcroppings and treacherous cliffs. Some plummeting leagues below off of the edges. The risk was not calculated here. It could not be. There was only a group instinct to this process and it was maddening. The blades of the invaders cut tracks of crimson to reveal only more of their inten-", Jessick was cut short by the small hand that presented itself shortly below his eyes horizon.

    "Yes, what it is it Martessa?", he asked with some annoyance.

    "How come the people didn't just fight back?", it was more of a request to change the story by the small girl than a question on Jessick's recount of history.

    He protested her question with an indignant look.

    "Now who are we to change history, then?", he exclaimed with frustration.

    His furrowed brow softened as he looked upon her pleading face, "Oh very well." Jessick adjusted his position on the small wooden foot stool and sighed before continuing. "They desperately clammored down and found that there was no passage that presented itself to them. One by one the voices rose up, and each of them turned to face their attackers. Those that were once fleeing were now mighty with courage and stained pride. They ripped the limbs from weathered firs that grew along the craggy cliffs and made haste to return blow for blow. The mountain people were now fighting with all of their strength and will. They battled the invaders throughout the night, and well into dawns first light. Here they were victorious!" Jessick lifted a wooden brush from the girl's bed table and swung it wildly to her delight. "Yes, and here you are to sleep!" He grinned coyly and received an imposter of a frown from her.

    "Oh now, don't give me such looks. You'll be waking before you know it and soon enough chasing me around, questioning me and doing what all such sisters do. Now off to sleep with you." He grinned once more before blowing out the candle.

    "Jessick?", Martessa's voice quietly reached through the newly darkened room.

    Jessick groaned as if pained by a searing brand. "What, sister?"

    "Would you fight or run?", the question, plain as it was, stabbed with an imploring moral judgement for Jessick. He paused for a long moment before answering.

    "For you sister? For you I would fight." He smiled to himself knowing it to be true. As much as the child had persisted in pestering him daily, he loved her with an unwavering loyalty.

    The room fell silent after a short time and was only graced by the child's hushed snoring.

    Jessick cracked the door to the room allowing just enough light in, and slipped into bed in his room just across the hall.

    As he lay there in the silence he reflected on this harvest season's travels. They hadn't been much different from the two seasons before, but something disturbed him now. History appeared to be resurfacing and the stories of the 'folk' had been emerging greatly. They were more reclusive and inclined to keep their history a secret from him in seasons past. It disturbed him that they had such a change of heart. Perhaps he, like his younger sister, cared to imagine a pristine world where the travesties of men were non-existent. Slowly with the unknown burden lifting from his shoulders, sleep took its place and heavily weighed itself upon his eyelids. He slipped gradually at first, then the weariness of travel took its toll on his body and he drifted gratefully into a new world...

    There are many in the world that would find fault with those of your nature, young one. Many that would find you too inquisitive for your own good. I am not one of those however. This is good, is it not? I have heard the other folk speak of your inquiries with disdain and almost hatred. What is it you seek, man? Perhaps you would turn these secrets upon our people? It is with little trust that we grant you access to trade in our corner of the world. Why now would you reap our past to sow your own glory?

    Jessicks dreams were riddled with images of runic transcript not of a language he could understand. He struggled to decipher them. Over and over again he took an inkless quill to parchment attempting to trace the images. He cried out in anger, feeling helpless to grasp the nature of what was presented to him. The inscriptions taunted him dancing upon the crushed pulp of dead tree, laughing in a language beyond his comprehension. When he thought his mind could no longer endure the pain, the morning's first light poked through his window rendering him helpless to a fitful waking.

    Jessick woke with beads of sweat dripping from his brow. His eyes scanned the ceiling of the small home and focused on random dust particles in the fresh day light. The down filled mattress he rested upon was a true sign of his limited wealth, but it was a worthy investment as it allowed him the first moments of his day to live in comfort even if the rest of his day was filled with tireless work and negotiations. He stretched and shook off the images of this dream that haunted him for a fortnight. As he retracted from the ritual morning stretch and yawn the sound of small feet raced from the other room to his. He prepared himself for this onslaught of affection and with one hand protected his most precious posession from the leaping child.

    Martessa flew into the room as if she were part lark being chased by a predator hawk. Her girlish squeels filled the house and suddenly she was upon him!

    As she landed roughly on Jessick he stared at her for a moment, "You'll never stop will you?" he chuckled.

    "No.", she replied with a wicked grin.

    With that he yawned once more, even through the barrage of her small fingers probing for ticklish spots on his sides. It had become a regular morning event, but Jessick owed her that much. It had only been two years since their parents had disappeared, and the questioning had not ceased to their whereabouts until a few months ago. Still, the pain had never ceased, and it was these brief moments together that dulled it just enough.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    So, please look for it at the first quarter of next year (2008), I hope! I look forward to writing more, and continue to write for Sundren! Note this is all before editing...so please, I know my writing is choppy, it's alright no need to tell me over and over again, my mother, grandmother and girlfriend have ALL shown me little clemency with regards to proper grammar.
    Last edited by Darkrite; 10-10-2007, 01:07 AM.


  • #2
    Oh wow! I will be sure to pick it up .

    P.S. So on a scale of 1-10 how hard was it to get published? I want to become a published author too...
    ~Lyonette L'cyr (Rook)-- Deader than Malaclypse


    ~Megandlla Uyth 'Llar -- In a land Far Far away!

    ~Emilee Mistwalker -- A Female Sigrun? Pfft, far cooler--.... eh.... Hated!!

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    • #3
      Hmm personlly I think this should be caled:Valen Ember times.
      Er, just kidding.

      Mint stuff. Writing a novel myself, but it's sci-fi. Good luck on this.
      There's a thin line between the definition of genius and insanity; I cross it all the time.

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      • #4
        Are we placing this scale on par with the pain scale they give you in a physician's office? If that's the case, the pain rates on a scale of 8.

        I do feel I have to let you know that there are a lot of procedures to having a book published for the first time. You should know that you might want to create a 'poor mans patent' before even attempting to publish, and then you'll want to fork out the fifty to 'x' amount of dollars (depending on what office you take it to) for copyright. Once you're done with that, you need to (and I don't know why), release a portion of your copyright to the publisher for what they call in a 'publishers copyright'...which basically means once you're under contract, you're screwed. They have legal right to sue you if you break your written contract. That's why I'm not posting much more than half of the prelude. *grins*

        In all honesty though, nutranurse, it is well worth it. The pain of finding a publishing agent succumbs to the pleasure of knowing that you'll have your name on something if only for a wink in time. For me it's the pleasure of knowing that once I've passed on in this life, my child will be able to tell his children "You know, your grandfather wrote a book...let's read that tonight instead."

        The most difficult trial in having a book published is...writing the book. I'm not a great writer. Truly great writers often write with rhythmic pose. I'm surely not one of those, and I'm unable to elaqueate any of my thoughts so as to conform to one subject.
        However, I'm a diligent writer and I stick with a story. You don't have to be a great writer, just a purposeful one.

        Stick with it, guys; best of luck to you both!

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        • #5
          Ah, thanks for the advice and I will be looking forward to your book
          ~Lyonette L'cyr (Rook)-- Deader than Malaclypse


          ~Megandlla Uyth 'Llar -- In a land Far Far away!

          ~Emilee Mistwalker -- A Female Sigrun? Pfft, far cooler--.... eh.... Hated!!

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